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This is another very nice piece, Great job! :D "She paces her room, heels in hand Heart racing at millions per second. His unsteady foot lands on the pedal" - ...

Hello Lorny :) Congratulations on your first post and I'm excited to see that you've done such great work on this poem. In my point-of-view it is an account of ...

True words! Friends are important and are the only people who can ever understand us for who we are. Congratulations on your first post here and I'm looking forward to ...

Ah, The suburban buses of Chennai. They help people commute from place to place with such efficiency and care that each and every passenger has a happy smile on their ...

This piece sounds good. And is something I can relate to very well. As for any conflicts, the above reviewer has mentioned it :) . It's small and has a ...

I'm sure that with a little rhythm and music, it would make a great song. Maybe even a good Gospel song too. I like this piece a lot, not only ...

A very nice, inspiring account of friendship. As your signature says, "sometimes the hardest things and the right things are the same". Very true indeed (The Fray are quite awesome, ...

I can't wait to hear this in song! You're amazing at writing lyrics and this piece is very well written. It's sounds really endearing and the words flow like a ...

Is that a tear I see you shed? Is it of sorrow or of dread? Before you answer me though, turn, and take a look around. Spring is here, its ...

This poem is so modest and bares open the entire emotions of the persona. The anguish and sorrow experienced from trying to gain something (or in this case - someone) ...

I love country songs. All about a Chevy truck, a radio and enjoying the drive. I'm imagining a number of singers trying to sing it, though I'm indecisive over the ...

I sit in this old empty room all quiet and still, it's like I'm on the moon. The only company I'll entertain are shadows and furniture and my lonesome brain. ...

I had no idea what the poem was all about too until I read your description of it. On first reading it, it sounds a lot like a letter that ...

This is very nice. The idea behind it is really interesting as well. You've made a slight twist of the old saying, which makes it original and at the same ...

Quite impressive, qara! There is a lot of feeling in this piece... and I can feel it! The realization of getting the same repetitive unpleasant feelings again is very hard ...