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  • Other Re: Cholerparagon - Profile

    Looks like a character straight out from Eragon. The detail is impeccable and entire drawing itself is beautiful to look at. The added profile is great. These guys shouldn't be ...

    Nov 9, 2011
  • Romantic Short Stories Re: Cuts.

    This is such a great piece. I know everyone who's been reviewing this has said the same thing too :) You've managed to make it dark and intense while also ...

    Nov 9, 2011
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Homesick

    Hi Sharit, There is no better place like home. And I agree with you. Moving away from something so familiar and then suddenly being exposed to the relentlessness of a ...

    Nov 9, 2011
  • Romantic Novels Re: Apple Cherry Pie...and other sweet things.

    Well, the concept and the presentation along with the ideology of describing the whole affair is very good. the POVs of al the characters, including the narrator's had their own ...

    Nov 8, 2011
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: First day at school

    Ah, reminds me of my first day when I moved to my new school way back when I was in 5th standard. The fears, hopes, joys, expectancies and all just ...

    Nov 8, 2011
  • Narrative Poetry Re: A Hare's Tale

    I had a lot of fun writing this piece! There was so much I thought I could have made out of it, but this particular plot seemed just fine. And ...

    Nov 8, 2011
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Open Up for Me

    Beautiful. I was thinking of ways of how to say how great I thought this poem was and beautiful is the only word that matches. This is a flawless piece ...

    Nov 6, 2011
  • Lyrics Re: Don't You Let It Die, Jane

    Wow, gee! Applauses! I love it when people are inspired by things which look dire and hopeless and make out something so creative and inspiring. I love every single line ...

    Nov 6, 2011
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Detachment

    Ajt! Clearly, you've been through some hardship or struggle and with the stressed out usage of words and the raw emotion of this poem, it's plainly visible. The imagery and ...

    Oct 31, 2011
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Dead Romance

    Hi bookworm, It's a pity you don't write poetry more often because I sure like this piece. The predicament of romance lost and the various effects have been portrayed vividly. ...

    Oct 27, 2011
  • Narrative Poetry Re: Fiery Flames

    Hi Lime, Firstly, congratulations on posting your first poem. And despite it being your first, you went ahead and stretched it long, which is quite commendable. I love rhyme and ...

    Oct 27, 2011
  • Art & Photography Re: a photo from perdido.

    The b/w film does really make the picture look... real. The first picture is of a typical protest atmosphere and I like the composition in it. the faces and the ...

    Oct 27, 2011
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Secrets

    This poem is so rhythmic and charming. I've read a lot of poems on suicide and I'm quite surprised that there are so many people who write about it. Suicide ...

    Oct 27, 2011
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Eternal Night

    Hi Lorna! :D This is a brilliant piece! to have less than 4 words in almost all the lines and to make those lines make sense is quite a task. ...

    Oct 27, 2011
  • Art & Photography Re: My first attempt at Photography

    Me, just fooling around I had my brother take this pic. The 'glasses' were just for fun, lol ^_^ Dragon fan The Huge dragon fan that hangs on a wall ...

    Oct 27, 2011


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