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Mikko! I really need to read your stuff more often 'cause you are such a talented writer. This poem has so much innocence attached to it because it is about ...

Hi Snickerdooly :) This piece is just classy and the more I read it, the more interested I get to read it again. I love the way you've rhythmically, through ...

Solly! XD Ah, change! its affects leave many profound as well as dis-heartened. Leaving 'home' to go off somewhere else and attempting to make a life despite all the uncertainties ...

Anna! Like Solly, I've become a fan too. This poem is exceptional, especially when you see it as a metaphor. It's such a simple stone-glass context and you've made it ...

Hi Tiny Dancer :) This poem is great. And since it is in rhyme, I'll give you extra brownie points! The fluidity of it is all good and there are ...

Qara! Sometimes we all feel that we are much less than what we truly are and start beating ourselves up about it. It's not about the number of times you ...

Gee! Epic awesomeness. The imagery is so good and really captivates my imagination. It has this very raw and straight-to-the-point feel to it. It's a great poem, no doubt. Your ...

Hi Angus! This is a brilliant piece and I share your sentiments as well. People yearn to be accepted and liberated of their uniqueness that makes them different from the ...

Hi Bint! This poem really sets the mood for change and keeps the ball rolling from the very first stanza. Influential and encouraging as it is, it also delves into ...

Hi Anwesha! I really like this poem. It's a story of strength and perseverance and moving on despite whatever hardship life may bring. A beautiful message interwoven in a fine ...

Hi Anna! Firstly, welcome to YWS and congratulations on your first post. This poem has great depth and truly portrays the contrasts of the two individuals, despite being in a ...

Hi wewinwelose, This piece really resonates with the message of living a better life. I love the rhyme and the transition from each rhyme scheme is seamless as each stanza ...

Hi Daisuki, You're really good at this! the first two drawings looked really great. I expressions were well drawn. And I agree, the darker mermaid does look mysterious. Great job! ...

Hi Dogs, This is a nice simple poem and despite being of an imaginative and creative tone, is not without its share of flaws. I love the concept of neverland ...

Hi Zwinky, There's nothing more thought-provoking than demystifying the powers of God. All very logical and practical questions you've asked. And what of their answers? God knows. I like this ...