murtuza

Hello! I need help! I've just posted my first novel called Graduation and the first chapter - 'Prologue' as well and I've gone through all the steps to publish it. ...

The stage was set, the program was about to start. The audience was seated, a few still coming in and struggling to find a seat to observe. Everyone had come, ...

Hi WinterBloom :D A hearty Welcome to YWS! Glad you could join this amazing community of fun people! You'll definitely enjoy your time here and I'm looking forward to reading ...

Short and brief with a message of hope and encouragement for the plight of mankind. Although i feel that in some places, the poem was losing me, but you picked ...

Tiny! I love it! Better than the Nameless bit as well :) Great job writing this. 'Black Feathers' is way better! I enjoyed this piece a lot. Murtuza :)

Hi Amy! Yes, eve-teasing, lecherous and perverted. Many men share these traits and have a certain pride about it. Maybe just to show that they are actually 'men' or either ...

Karin! It seems like the poetic forces accumulated your mind and have brought you to write this powerful piece with such detailed emotions. The imagery is so sublime and it ...

Hi Story! Yup, this sounds like an astronomical delicacy. It's neat and well structured with a good play on words and oh so delicious! I thoroughly enjoyed this piece. *burps* ...

Lava! So this poem is great! I may be mistaken but in my head, it's about sipping coffee or something like that and joys that a cuppa can bring to ...

Hi Joshua! So I'm back to review part 2 and I loved it! It was creative and really delved into the mind's eye. However, I can't help but feel underwhelmed ...

Hello, JP! This is a very interesting story and the mystery just consumes me! I like how you've managed to portray the reactions of the father as he tries to ...

Hi Confetti :) It's a very sweet and warm story that you've laid out for us here. About two friends and their journey through life together and when one of ...

Solly!!! This poem just blows me away. This is the type of poem that really makes me appreciate the fine talent that you bring to your work. I love this ...

Audy! Well, I'm not that adept at art, but I can say for sure that the subtle shading on the face and on the bottom surface as well as the ...

Spinelli! Alright, so your poem is... yes, different. Not in a weird way, just in the way that - the reader needs to find a certain meaning among the various ...