murtuza

Hey, Deanie :) A great concept followed by a great narration and a very sweet ending. This pome is great and doesn't need to show off. It's simple and quite ...

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Hey, Kat! This reminds me a lot of Kingdom Hearts. It's a real nice key, btw. Great pic! ;) Keep 'em snapping! Murtuza :)

Story! This piece is one of the best I've read today! I simply love this. It's brilliant and heart-touching. I'm so inspired by this and the imagery is just brilliant. ...

Hey Lizzie! Welcome to YWS! I'm glad you've joined this place! It's just super-great! Feel free to ask me anything about this website and if you need any help. And ...

Hey, remember! This is a very cool piece! It's different in a sense because it's simply plain from the heart; or at least that's how I feel about it :) ...

Hi ofir! This is a very interesting piece and I'm glad you've posted it. The descriptions and thoughts here sound so personal. I agree with you totally. Feelings are strange. ...

Hey, Joanne! Like the previous reviewer said, it's really moving. And that sense of love and care just ripples through through every line. A very sweet poem, indeed. Thanks for ...

Hey dogs :) This is a good piece and I like it mostly because it's something you've written with your raw emotion. The only nitpick I have is that it ...

Hey Fizz, I'm quite perplexed at this story but at the same time, amused. The mystery of why this woman is in such a state and the ants and her ...

Hey, Dreamwalker! You've got great talent! The language and the flair of it all just captivate my mind. I like the descriptions and imagery. Your play with words is quite ...

Amy! So you've been bitten by the rhyming bug, eh? Well, you've been bitten good! I'm liking this structure a lot as well. The insults your duty to impart. I ...

Hello Angus! I like this poem very much and especially how you've divided it into the three stanzas respective to their time - past, future and present. I feel that ...

Hey, Gabby! Ah, I like first attempts! This was a great poem! I really enjoyed it and the structure was really cool. Language the descriptions were all fine, though I ...

Judy! I think this is a great start to a geat series and I could instantly recognize the star-wars themed atmosphere that surrounds the entire storyline. I think the previous ...