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Re: Autumn
Hey, uncharted! This poem has some great metaphorical usage and it all comes along seamlessly. The transitions from being such a beautiful day from the "orange covered paths" to the ...
Nov 27, 2011 -
Re: Bathe
Hey there, Charity! I like the extreme dramatization and the imagery you've managed to capture. Your creative mind has great ways of expressing itself since it makes such great descriptions ...
Nov 27, 2011 -
Re: Hit the Penguin [2]
Ahem... 321. The game by firestarter on the frontpage is really tough! >_< How are you guys all getting such awesome high scores? D:
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Re: A Gray Delivery
Hi Audy! Wow, who knew that eating a pizza could get so intense? You've managed to get into the heart of the darkness that today's social forums portray and encourage. ...
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Re: Masked
Hey there, Unmarked! I like this poem a lot for the great use of imagery and the entire conception about this. I'm not one for giving much critique, but as ...
Nov 26, 2011 -
Re: Mastering Your Camera (A Brief Guide)
Hey, Mizzle! Thanks a bunch for this guide! I'm not much of a photographer but I do enjoy snapping. I have a point-and-shoot Sony as well as my phone's camera ...
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Re: Rename The User Above You
raspberryinthemiddleofnowhere
Nov 26, 2011 -
Re: Hey everyone
Hey Serenity! Welcome to this fantastic community called YWS. I'm sure you are going to have a great time over here. And you are definitely most welcome to post any ...
Nov 26, 2011 -
Re: Would You Like a Cookie?
Hey, Carefree! Firstly, welcome to YWS! I'm glad you joined this community! And congratulations on your first post. A really great one at that too! This poem is so sweet ...
Nov 26, 2011 -
Re: Fill-out form for access to Heaven.
Mikko! this is hilarious fun! I'm so lol-ed up right now. xD But seriously, if I had a ticket to heaven, then I'd definitely give it to you! God bless, ...
Nov 26, 2011 -
Re: Loss - (emotion despair)
Hey, Bob! You've made such a great story here and I have enjoyed reading this a lot! The chronicles of a soldier during war and how he managed to gain ...
Nov 26, 2011 -
Re: Now That You Have Destroyed Me
Hey there, Taylor! This was a very strong poem since you've worded out every bit really well. And you have got some great talent building up in you :) I'm ...
Nov 26, 2011 -
Re: Microsoft Paint Test (Orange Ball)
Hey, Shiney! I didn't know that MS Paint was that versatile and that powerful. But then again, it's the painter that has done such a great job. This is great ...
Nov 26, 2011 -
Re: This word reminds me of... [2]
Melodrama
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Re: Feathers of Fire
Hey, KFMATA! This is a great cover and you should totally win! Keep that creative juices flowing! Murtuza :)
Nov 26, 2011
