murtuza

Hermy!

Best of luck with the mission, Nate. I'm sure Apollo will make a safe landing. Keep up the wonderful work.

XD Hey, WrittenInStone! I've got goosebumps all over from reading this piece and I've got to say that you've managed to capture that gritty, gory effect only found in the ...

Hi Mirasol! This is a light and compact poem with wonderful lines and a great meaning. Many people would look at the sky as being a boring space with just ...

Hey, barefootrunner! This is quite an interesting piece, especially because you've played with the words really well and the poem in itself is a good lesson. All trufax, no doubt ...

Hey misstoria! I love the frank and casual message of this poem. I didn't get tired of the comparisons to all those cliched movies and of the persona wanting all ...

dancing

Hello, FreshMeat! Well, this poem is pretty good, considering it is a first effort. My first effort isn't wasn't even half as good. I don't know if you've edited after ...

Count on Me - Bruno Mars

Hey, Heyley! You've delved into such an important matter that most people oversee quite easily. The transition of the girl 'as she walks by' to 'when she gets home' looks ...

Hey, Dreaming! All lovely pictures indeed. I especially loved the second one. The snaps are really good quality and the raw nature itself is much more appealing! I need to ...

barefootrunner! Haha... I'm chuckling while I'm writing this! Hilarious and delightful. Thanks for sharing! Murtuza :)

Hey there, canonball! This poem is structured really well. The imagery here of the 'creature' and how obsessed you are with seeing 'it' again is all very well described. I've ...

Mikko! This story is sweetness personified! The curious little girl asking all her questions and the father deciphering a way to answer them in the most accurate yet understandable way, ...

Hey, wewinwelose! This poem sounds a little raw and could use some more refinement. But on the whole, 8 minutes? O.O That's great! You've weaved a wonderful tale for the ...