murtuza

Hey, davantageous! This is a great poem and is so smooth from beginning to end. The first stanza is a great opening and delves into the context right away. I ...

Hey, Ancient! I like this piece a lot. A writer can definitely build castles in the sky and it can be that very castle that ultimately might destroy the writer's ...

1.Favourite colours: Black, red, blue, gold aaaaand a bit of green too :3 2.Favourite activities: I love writing and going for long drives to the beach and watching movies, spending ...

Hey, BrokenSkye. This is a great effort with rhyme and I can remember my first poem being somewhat like this. You've used a simple rhyming scheme and a theme that ...

Hi, Tommy! This is quite the twisted Barney love song, no? I had been hooked right from the first stanza and was led up to the end, still curious as ...

Hey, Craze! Welcome to YWS and I'm sure you'll have a great time here. I'm looking forward to reading your works and I'm glad that you've already started posting. YWS ...

Hey, UpandOut15! A simple poem about goodbyes and missed times, just as the title suggests. I like the simplicity of the piece and the easy way that you've managed to ...

Hey, creativity! This is really nice poem and I especially like the proud and independent image of the persona that you have portrayed. This is a short little piece with ...

Hey, snowberry! I really like the concept behind this poem and the implementation of the rhyme scheme (despite being quite unrefined). I like the story that you are trying to ...

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Hey, Teresa! First off, like Kamas above me said, don't hold yourself in such disregard of your work. Whether it's good or bad, we are all here to learn after ...

Hey, Alexandria! Welcome to YWS! I'm glad you've joined this wonderful community. I'm sure you're going to enjoy your time here :D I'm murtuza and the guy in my avatar ...

I knew I would be late. But it was only when I actually did look at the clock that I realized with a sudden shock and I yelped, "Oh no! ...

Hey, Charlie! I'm chuckling aloud as I'm writing this review. To find our favourite superheroes in these types of situations is both endearing and funny as can be. The last ...

Hey, crazedasian1 Welcome to YWS and congratulations on your first post! :D First off, I like this poem for its story and its conceptualization. For me, the structure is quite ...