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Hey, demib! I do like this poem a lot. But it is still lacking in the wholesomeness of it. You see, you are talking about the Ocean's happiness and I'm ...

Hey, Kyllorac! Yes, I'm a big rhyming fan as well! And this is a great piece! short and lovely, quite charming too. Just a suggestion, but I believe that the ...

Hey, Anna! This is a great poem! And I love poems based off these classic and timeless stories. The day I fell down the rabbit hole, nowhere near was there ...

Hey, Mars! This is a great piece with crisp imagery and wonderful descriptions. The capitalization here is off, but for some reason I get the feeling that you've done it ...

Yay! Congrats, Creativity! You rule! xD

A single piano plays . I ts sad tune across the gray, and desolate room reeking of death and gloom Dying embers wrought their ghost upon the wall, fraught with ...

Hey, Davies! I love the concept of this. I think that everyone should try something like this. Writing a letter to yourself, that's a brilliant way for self-assessment and improve ...

Hey, Gawrav! You've tackled a very powerful theme here and the story, plot, dialogue and overall Novel, will be dependent on that. So it's highly advisable that you first take ...

Hey, Hemayed! Yes, I can see the frustration in this poem and the urge to make that 'kill'. You've definitely made a point and you've managed to express the intents ...

Welcome, Gawrav! Nice to have you here at YWS. It's good to see another fellow Indian here. Don't worry about the grammatical stuff or anything like that. After all, no ...

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Well, it's been exactly 2 months for me since joining YWS today. :) This community has given me so much. Not only friends with whom I can share my thoughts ...

Hey, Sarebear! This is such a beautiful and endearing poem. The imagery is really nice and brings out the feel of the poem. However, if there was any suggestion I ...

Hey, Teenager! I can absolutely share your sentiments since I've had the similar sort of emotions as well. Like Ancient said, you were always asking the questions and not really ...

Hey, Anna! This poem really reminds me of a children's story about a monster and his garden, but far more of a serious tone than that! I like the imagery ...