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murtuza

  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Poems on Faith

    Hey, Misstoria! The first peom 'Faith' is quite a great way of showing your feelings on the subject. Although, I feel that faith cannot lie in between truth and lies ...

    Dec 7, 2011
  • Art & Photography Re: Aemon

    Hey, Blacky! I like when they show how the character modelling is made through so many different steps. The whole conception of it and then the final work put on ...

    Dec 7, 2011
  • Narrative Poetry Re: She gives

    Hermy!! Wow, I love this poem a lot! The somewhat dark yet confusing subject matter is quite intriguing and begs to be asked the question - 'What in the world ...

    Dec 7, 2011
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Happiness

    Hey, Weaver! I'm really liking this piece a lot. It's quite frank and casual. The opening and ending are sweet and bring about the entire context of the poem really ...

    Dec 7, 2011
  • Narrative Poetry Re: Hymn I (Lexington)

    Hey Lumi! I can definitely imagine seeing this as a series. The thing I found most appealing in this piece was the imagery. It wasn't that in-depth and gave the ...

    Dec 7, 2011
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Winter Air

    Hey, Tucker!! I loved the last winter poem a lot and I love this one even more. And yes, it's got a lot of good quality in terms of imagery ...

    Dec 7, 2011
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: My Son is Gay

    Hey, Bear! There's not much I'll be able to add to the mountain of praise that you've already received for this piece. But what makes this so unique is that ...

    Dec 7, 2011
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Lenny!

    Hey, winie! This is a sweet little anecdote that you've put up. I like the contrast between the two characters and the fact that one of them is trying so ...

    Dec 5, 2011
  • Narrative Poetry Re: Sea of Snow

    Dogs! Lovely imagery that you've portrayed here. And bringing about the concept of Hades and Persephone was a really nice touch. This is definitely a great poem was losing me ...

    Dec 5, 2011
  • Lyric Poetry Re: The Snow.

    It sounds even nicer a second time around :D

    Dec 5, 2011
  • Lyric Poetry Re: The Snow.

    Mikko!! Why hadn't I laid my eyes on this beautiful piece sooner? The description, the imagery, the structure, the rhyme, the sheer novelty and idea behind this piece is so ...

    Dec 5, 2011
  • Romantic Novels Re: Fakebook-Chapter 1

    Hey, Gowrav! Unfortunately, this chapter left me a little disappointed. The subject matter, 'dialogue', the references to pop-culture and the main idea behind most of the details given here sound ...

    Dec 5, 2011
  • Lounge, The Re: Report a good member!

    Qaralynn, AhmadBlues, HarryPotterRocks, Dogs and Deanie! These guys are way cool! xD

    Dec 5, 2011
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: What was I supposed to do?

    Hey, snow! So this poem is quite dramatic and filled with expressions of great quality. Like creativity said, this piece is saying a story and you've done a swell job ...

    Dec 5, 2011
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Can't say that I love you

    Dogs! I like this piece a lot! And I'm sorry for being such a Disney noob, but I haven't the song yet. Dx Though it does read really well and ...

    Dec 5, 2011


i got called an enigma once so now i purposefully act obtuse
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