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Re: The Arms Race and World Peace
Is the world becoming a better place with the developments of new arms in every civilized nation? If the world has finally attained self-peace, is there any need for ammunition ...
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Re: Confession
Hey, Shinda! I do very much like this poem. The rhyme patterning and the whole conceptual idea of this as being a 'confession' really complement each other. The way the ...
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Re: What is the member above you known for? [2]
I've read a couple of Dudette's reviews and she provides good feedback on the works and points out stuff that even I may have left out! xD Oh and she's ...
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Re: Trish
Hey, Payne! Creepiness! Dx But yes, you've nailed the entire concept of it all! xD Trish really reminds me of those Korean.Japanese horror movies. Especially 'The Grudge' and 'Shutter'. I ...
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Re: The Long Road
Mikko! This is a fine example of how profound a writer can become when she writes something that inspires herself completely. :) I'm glad you've realized that and that you've ...
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Re: Report A Site Bug
Hello! I need help! I had posted my first novel called Graduation and the first chapter - 'Prologue' as well and I've gone through all the steps to publish it. ...
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Re: Shatter me, Break me
Hey, Aliyah! This is a strongly worded poem with a context that I'm sure many are familiar with. I feel that this poem can bring about it's true potential. Whether ...
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Re: Adoption
Hey, Deanie! This is clearly one of my favourite poems by you. You've employed so much into this that it makes this such an interesting read. I know you've already ...
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Re: Your Dreams Kept me Awake
Hey, Kat! There's not much I can lay out for you here since the others have already given you all you need to improve. And this isn't a review :) ...
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Re: Eternity
Hey, Anwesha! I really like the simplicity and the structure of this poem. It's sweet in it's message and sheds light on the magical personality that love and affection show. ...
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Re: YWS: Apollo
Will there be any possibilities of a mobile-viewing oriented website? That would be a really nice feature since I always take a quick peak of YWS on my phone, which ...
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Re: Beautiful Baby
Hey, OverEasy! I like the name of this poem and just thought I'd take a look at it. And I'm glad I did :) This is sweet and has so ...
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Re: The Impossible Quiz
This is a game I played a while back. It's amazingly fun and horrendously addictive. The rules are very simple: Just choose the correct answer. You'll have 3 lives at ...
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Re: Kissing Alfredo
Hey, Audy! Firstly, this is not a review. I'm too inexperienced in writing short stories to give out any sort of correctional value for this piece. But all I can ...
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