muffy

yay everyone is so nice:D

Thats awsome, glad your here shadow girl! This is definetly the place you'd want to share your writing and improve. You'd be suprised about people who might like to write ...

Hey Queen:D Welcome! I'm new too and so far I really like it here. If you have any questions I'll help the best I can. This is a great place ...

yay welcome:D, I'm in the same boat when it comes to writing. I'm picking it u again too. Have you writen anything so far? Hope you have fun here, so ...

There is so much flow in this. I don't even think I could give you any useful critique. I really liked how this whole religious theme was tied in since ...

I think you could have put a little more description and take your time writing about the scenes so it can be more dramatic. I hope that this is useful ...

You have me interested for more:). I'd like to see more of how the main characters look. I really appreciate the attention to detal, thats the stuff that makes lil ...

Hi everyone I'm muffy! I'm fresh and new;D, and I'll love to meet some cool nice people. One thing I'll say about myself is I absolutely love a good story ...