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I appreciate all critique;D. If you've read this before, there is more added. Thankyou! C4C (critique for critique) If there are any spelling mistakes, its because it slipped. I'll fix ...

lol why you say that?

other than the obvious because i'm sure that we automatically can tell a boy for a boy and a girl for a girl. i hope.lol personally, i've recieved a comment ...

yay welcome! I look forward to checking it out:D, maybe you could help me on my writing too since you've been published. I barely post because I'm in college too ...

lol!! i do the same stuff beth. is it ok i call you beth? just try sticking with it is all i can say and maybe incorporate the ideas that ...

i want to know why you don't play football?lol Welcome to YWS Caroline, its great to have so Europe culture in the mix

Thats interesting you don't like vampires but you like werewolves.lol thats cools. Great to have someone a fan of Mondays, personally I like Sundays and Saturdays=Weekend:D

Miiike welcome, i look forward to see some of this awsomeness you speak of.lol You must be all that to be published, who published you? And how did it happen?

This is amazing:D, i really love the amount of detail in every scene. You have a great style of writing. I want to finish this!!argh! It seems to me that ...

lol I didn't mean to make that Alden and Marco mistake wow. Marco was supposed to be taken out and changed to Alden (thats the main character's name). Thankyou so ...

Hey welcome Evans! Glad you've stumbled upon our happy little lair:D. Hope you find this place as entertaining as I have, I think its hilarious that you can't explain the ...

This is part of my first chapter of Prone to Weakness. I hope you like it and help me improve:D. Please Rate when your finished! Barely gripping his glass of ...

aaaaggh! pardon the expression but, aggh! its so cute.lol stories like this always get me so i'll try to give unbiased critique. ok, i don't know what the plot is ...

its sounds cute so far, i like it:D. Just some some constructive criticism, i hope that you eventually go into depth of the story to a scene where you elaborate ...

i really like the plot! of course you should keep going,lol, i think this could be something thats not only a great read but shows what people miss out on ...