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Re: Come What May (Working Title)
What line are you suggesting for the beginning?
Wed May 29, 2013 10:40 pm -
Re: Come What May (Working Title)
Thank you!!! I need to really work on the flow and suspense of it all. I just didn't realize it when I read it in my head. Thanks a lot!
Wed May 29, 2013 10:23 pm -
Re: Come What May (Working Title)
Well, I was trying to kind of use a parallel structure with the "this girl" to make it flow, but I guess that failed! Same thing with the choppiness: I ...
Wed May 29, 2013 10:22 pm