mrawesome

Thanks for the review! The link was helpful :) Yeah the grammar needs a little editing no doubt, I'm working on it. By the way, it says on you badge ...

Thank you so much. I could feel something was missing, and you've given me the missing ingredients. That show don't tell thing is awesome, and useful. I'm gonna try that ...

Thanks man!!!!! Those were some really good suggestions, I'm gonna work on that radio thing. So maybe when the book get's published, you'll be in the acknowledgments ;)

This was a new twist to an old story. Like turning a hard core, break up rap, into a poem. Polite, but a punch in the nose. The last line ...

Woah, well what d'you know, my first review. Thanks!