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Thanks for the review! The link was helpful :) Yeah the grammar needs a little editing no doubt, I'm working on it. By the way, it says on you badge ...

Thank you so much. I could feel something was missing, and you've given me the missing ingredients. That show don't tell thing is awesome, and useful. I'm gonna try that ...

Oh my god. When I read The Deranged Bibliophile I thought, "nah, it can't get any better that this" I stand corrected. It took me a couple of seconds to ...

Take a look at my book's prologue viewtopic.php?t=79503 and first chapter viewtopic.php?t=82256 Thanks. :)

Take a look at my book's prologue viewtopic.php?t=79503 and first chapter viewtopic.php?t=82256 Thanks. :)

Thanks man!!!!! Those were some really good suggestions, I'm gonna work on that radio thing. So maybe when the book get's published, you'll be in the acknowledgments ;)

Chapter one Okay guys, please be gentle with my heart. It's still a rough copy, so I am open to suggestions, just, keep it sweet, please :P We’d just left ...

Congratulations, you've managed to create a good beginning, which is probably one of the most important things to keep in mind while writing ANYTHING. It's the very first sentence sometimes ...

This was a new twist to an old story. Like turning a hard core, break up rap, into a poem. Polite, but a punch in the nose. The last line ...

This was a new twist to an old story. Like turning a hard core, break up rap, into a poem. Polite, but a punch in the nose. The last line ...

I read your comic book by the way, LOVE IT!!!!!

Thanks!!! You know, I actually talked to Nike about the stuff, but then the F.B.I came into the room and stole my blueprints ;)

DID IT!!!!!

Yeah I'm trying, lets see if I can figure something out.

These are some of the doodles I, well, doodled, whenever I found an unused piece of paper :)