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You have gotten me hooked.You have a way of using dialogue to add a lot to these two characters. Bridget continues to interest me and I'm loving how sarcastic and ...

These twists always get me. Thank you for not giving me the run-of-the-mill romance fare which I was kind of expecting when guy with "innocent, dreamy eyes" rang the doorbell. ...

Oh man, that was intense. Real experience? It reminds me a lot of times where I will smile or laugh at the most inappropriate times. It's horrible. I want to ...

I knew it! I knew something was off ever since she said no one had shown interest in her. Don't get in the car. Don't get in the car. They ...

This piece was so mind-numbingly intense. It reminded me of a movie I recently watched, Black Swan , which was haunting to say the least. I'll go line-by-line and correct ...

Hi there. Wow. This first chapter got right into it, didn't it? I like the straight-forward action. It works in that we're introduced to the main straight-away and you get ...

Scathing, in a hauntingly good way. A way that made me want to shout and say that YES nobody likes you, you perfect beanpole. Then I remembered that I'm a ...

I think this was a solid poem. I could see the speaker's pain. Reading it made me wonder what happened to him in his past. If I may make a ...

Hello, I came here after writing a review on the first chapter of this novel, and now I wish I had read the prologue first. I liked the feel of ...

Hello, this will be my first review on this site. Hope it helps. First of all, I liked this first chapter. Definitely got and kept me hooked and reading, and ...