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I know some about plays, so if you want to continue with this play and make it a little better, I'm going to give you some tips on how to ...

Positives: Nice story line! That twist at the end was awesome, I loved it. Nice conflict between the male and female leads of your story. I love to see tension. ...

Positives: I liked this story. When you said short story, you meant short story, and I mean that in a good way. You gave the story a beginning, middle, and ...