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  • Other Re: "What's The Deal" Admission Letter

    The subject of the letter is what my writing process was for my screenplay about masculinity and what I've learned about masculinity now after I've written the screenplay. Please critique ...

    Sep 25, 2007
  • Archive Re: Camelot

    Althea climbed out of the dark river, her skin glittering a light blue. She looked around, trying to figure out where all of that sound had come from. She took ...

    Sep 24, 2007
  • Archive Re: Life Of Crime

    Althea's eyes flashed and they went to their icy overtone when she looked at Tiny. "It's different with him." Althea pulled up a chair next to Danny's bed and stared ...

    Sep 21, 2007
  • Archive Re: Life Of Crime

    ^ Good point. I was just about to say something about that. Thanks for speaking up first. I'm going to try and fix it if I can in this post. ...

    Sep 21, 2007
  • Archive Re: Life Of Crime

    "Ron-ronny! Wha-what are you doing?" Althea could hardly move her lips and she definitely couldn't move her legs. They were frozen in place. Ronny didn't stop to look back at ...

    Sep 20, 2007
  • Archive Re: Life Of Crime

    Ronny, Althea, and Danny had reached the club, all three standing on the sidewalk next to the front doors. "Better to come through the door that no one expects." Ronny's ...

    Sep 19, 2007
  • Archive Re: Pendragon

    Name - Althea Territory - Zadaa Age - 14 Acolyte - no acolyte (is one). Weapons - spears, electrified rods, steel arrows, wooden clubs, and staves Bio- Althea is the ...

    Sep 19, 2007
  • Archive Re: Camelot DT

    Appearance: She is about 4'7" and 75 lbs. Her coloring is a pale blue, to blend in with her surroundings, and her skin is smooth, with an occasional skin here ...

    Sep 18, 2007
  • Archive Re: Life Of Crime

    Danny took a step closer to Althea. She could feel his breath on her neck. "It's been a while." Althea nodded slowly, not turning to look at Danny, but staying ...

    Sep 18, 2007
  • Archive Re: Pendragon

    Should we pick characters from the actual books, or can we create new ones as well? (And thank you for creating this! I love these books. :) )

    Sep 18, 2007
  • Archive Re: Life Of Crime

    Althea woke up, a stream of light centered on her face. She didn't know what time it was, but her stomach was growling, so she figured she should get up ...

    Sep 17, 2007
  • Archive Re: Camelot

    Name and title: Althea, the sole daughter and heir of Calsius, the Ruler of the water nymph kingdom Class: Very high (in her society). Age: 14 Appearance: Althea is 4'7" ...

    Sep 17, 2007
  • Writing Tips Re: What's The Deal?

    That's a really good idea, thanks!

    Sep 16, 2007
  • Archive Re: Life Of Crime

    Althea stood next to Ronny and waited for Danny to open the door. It was still cold outside and she had no idea what time it was. She lost track ...

    Sep 16, 2007
  • Archive Re: Life Of Crime

    Althea stood in the dark alley and watched as Ronny walked away from her. It was cold outside and as she stood there, it began to rain. Her auburn hair ...

    Sep 15, 2007


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