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Re: The Knot Is Like Our Love
Two strong, moist hands pull you near Taking your waist and leaning you back Eyes study your curves like they study a map While searching the dark, it’s only you ...
Nov 26, 2007 -
Re: August Rush
I saw this tonight with my family. It was AMAZING. I find comfort in music, so I really related to the movie. It was well acted and well written. I ...
Nov 24, 2007 -
Re: Dear Mr. Chuck Palahniuk
Dear Mr. Chuck Palahniuk, Miss Rona says the only way to find true happiness is to risk being completely cut open. Miss Rona couldn’t have been more right. And though ...
Nov 23, 2007 -
Re: All We Know
I went through and made some changes. I think I covered everything everyone mentioned. If not, just restate it again and I will fix it! Thanks everyone for your help. ...
Nov 20, 2007 -
Re: Alone: Act 1
Okay, I agree with most of the things said, except for a couple. First off, if you don't have the whole script completed and you want people to critique what ...
Nov 12, 2007 -
Re: Jeepers
I liked it for a beginning. I just had a few questions about it. What did you write this for? and... Do you plan on making an act II?
Nov 11, 2007 -
Re: Peer editing in school
I don't think I've ever had a "horrible" paper. There have been papers that needed some work, but I've had my share of those too. In school, because people seem ...
Nov 10, 2007 -
Re: Go To & Complete College
I agree with the post for the most part. I think that, despite whether or not you have a degree in mind, you've got at least a first year to ...
Nov 8, 2007 -
Re: Mika
I think he's okay. He's a good artist, but there's just something about his sound that doesn't appeal to me. I have a friend who absolutely loves him though.
Nov 7, 2007 -
Re: God
If you know that it's wrong (and your gut should tell you), then it's wrong. Sounds like Mulan 2, no offence. :lol: no offense taken. Humanism is a very common ...
Nov 5, 2007 -
Re: God
I practice something that isn't really a religion, but a philosophy. It's called humanism. We basically believe that everyone has self worth, should be treated equally, etc. But we are ...
Nov 5, 2007 -
Re: Personal Narrative
I can't believe I didn't think about that. Thank you for telling me to remove it. I will definitely do that. And I wrote this piece for my AP Language ...
Nov 5, 2007 -
Re: Personal Narrative
I am (My name), a biracial, 16-year old female from the (my hometown). I live in (my hometown) with my mother, a single parent of the Caucasian race, in a ...
Nov 5, 2007 -
Re: Black River
"My name is Claire. Who are you?" The girl in front of claire shouted into the alleyway. "Who's there? Show yourself!" Claire stomped her foot. "I'm Claire. I've told you ...
Nov 2, 2007 -
Re: Black River
Helen (ELven-Maiden).
Oct 31, 2007
