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Anyone can join. Not sure what you mean by a character made by the game's creator. Like, De Nam or Gurdy/Hurdy. Someone that a player can't actually play in the ...

I'm totally in. I love this game. I just have two questions. - Is this storybook only for people who've played the game or is it for everyone? - Can ...

Mansi stood next to the spring, wading in the water. The small ripples created by her movement sent out waves of crimson red. The cold water had stung at first, ...

Name: Mansi Rank: Alpha Pack: Golgots Description/Picture: Dame: Druids Sire: Golgots Mansi stared out over the cliff, watching the sunset on the forest below. It was a cool evening and ...

I think the rhyme scheme you chose for this sonnet is unique. I usually see the abba abba aabbcc, but this is different. I like that. As for the whole ...

Javinder was a spineless man tall, and lank, and lean with minute ebony curls that like angry misquitos attached themselves to his head: shiny, tanned by the sun and with ...

"Keep your eye on the target," the voice softly coaxed over Mandy's shoulder. "Steady...steady..." She pulled the arrow back, shutting one eye. The target was 100 feet away. All she ...

You’re wondering if I’m in love OK then, yes, I’m in love like a new age Juliet standing on a street corner with my one of a kind Romeo drunkenly ...

I agree with Kitty. I think the dog-ate-my-homework thing is a little overused. You started it out really well and you had me hooked... until the dog thing. I second ...

Two main things that I noticed: 1.) I LOVED the way you connected lines to each other by making an ending a beginning. (I hope that made sense.) 2.)You did ...

I liked the subject of your poem. Your first stanza was a good opener, your last stanza tied together your whole poem nicely, and your third stanza created a really ...

This sounds really cool. I'm not sure if I'll have time to survive the school, but I'll give it a shot. haha Name: Mandy Whitehouse Age: 16 Skill: Archery Spell: ...

The sound of the school bell, signifying the end of the school day and the start of winter break, ignited cheers and cries of relief around the room. I grabbed ...

Thanks! =] I went back and edited the sonnet based off of your comment. I kinda wanted to show the voice killing the woman he loves. (Morbid, I know.)