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Chapter 1: A New Home Lee moved her legs around and the crunch of the stiff leather echoed throughout the silent car. Her sister, Elizabeth, sat asleep with her warm ...

SCENE 1 (A college psychology class. Noon on a Tuesday in August. Topic of discussion is relationships. TEACHER is standing in front of a desk stage right, talking to the ...

Positives: Nice story line! That twist at the end was awesome, I loved it. Nice conflict between the male and female leads of your story. I love to see tension. ...

Positives: I liked this story. When you said short story, you meant short story, and I mean that in a good way. You gave the story a beginning, middle, and ...

Hello Abbey (: Newb hehe. Naw only joking with you (: I hate that when you want to say something funny but nothing comes to mind =/ Sweet avi chose ...

Thanks for all the welcomes guys. Now I'm going to answer a few questions for everyone. =] Music I'm into: Well, I usually listen to anything, but I mostly listen ...

But nothing comes to mind. Anyways, hi everyone, I'm Abbey and I'm obviously new here. I love writing, as I'm sure most of you do. I write mostly fiction and ...