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*Sorry guys. I was away at my grandmother's for most of the weekend. I'll pick up where you guys left off with Mansi. Thanks.* Mansi hurled herself directly in front ...

* I don't know if it's too late, but I'm going to jump in. --------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Fera jumped out of the taxi and ran towards the giant black

I'm really excited for it. I plan on seeing it today, actually. I heard from this movie reviewer on the radio that it's not what everyone thinks it is. They ...

Name: Fera Form 1 (Animal): Dolphin Form 2 (Battle): Her skin goes rubbery and blue and her eyes go black, with increased sight. She is quick on her toes. Description/picture: ...

I really liked this poem. I think you did an excellent job with the topic and the flow of the poem was incredibly easy for me. It had its own ...

Mansi and Winnepea were laying down near a rock, giving Mansi some time to breath. Mansi turned her paw over and licked the still healing wound from the earlier fight ...

I was so excited when I found out about this. I have been lobbying for this thing to pass since early this year and it was sooo awesome to find ...

*The mountain lions were out hunting for food and to warn the golgot pack about the mountain lions, Mansi let out a howl, letting the lions know where she was ...

Mansi Golgot Alpha Mansi layed and watched as Winnepea and the other members of the pack surrounded the mystics. The mystics were outnumbered. They wouldn't last, even if they did ...

Name: Mira Age: 17 Race: Human Gender: Female Weapons: Bow and arrow Animals: Brown Tailed Fox; Name is Talia History: Lived with her mother, father, and older brother until their ...

Name: Monica Race: human/wolf Age: 27 Orientation: males Appearance: Eyes are a dark purple and her hair is a light brown, which is pulled into a ponytail. She is 5'6" ...

Mansi Golgot Alpha Mansi moved swiftly, weaving in and out of the trees. They were catching up to her. She lept over a large bush and lost her footing, wiping ...

Personally, I don't HATE the poem or think you should toss it completley. You should NEVER completely toss a poem. There's always something you can work with. First, I will ...

I like the content of your poem, but I don't really like the way it's formatted. For me at least, it's hard to read. Why not try breaking the poem ...

Thanks everyone for you input. It means a lot. I went back through and edited the 2nd, 3rd, and 4th stanzas. I hope it is to everyone's liking.