moonstar

Hi, I really liked this but I think you could have added more detail and description. Especially when your MC is in the lift and realizing just how claustrophobic she ...

Hi I've just read your lyrics and they're very good. I think with a bit of work it could be brilliant. At the moment it seems slightly more like a ...

Hi, I really liked your work! It was extremely good and I think the eyes and hair were very good. Will look out for your further work. Moonstar x

The next day I sat in my cupboard of a dressing room looking in my wonky mirror. All I had on was some trackie bottoms and sweater. Which was cleverly ...

HI, I loved your poem. It was short and sweet but so powerful. I got a really good picture in my head of what you were trying to say. I ...

Hello, I've just read your poem and it's so good! I don't think it had the best flow but what can I say I'm only a humble Novice. But apart ...

HI I've just read your piece and it was brilliant! I really liked the way you described the scene. It was clear to see what the characters thoughts were how ...

Hello, I read your poem and it was wonderful! It had a brilliant flow and really went deep if you get my meaning. Only think I'd say is your grammar ...

I took a deep breath. The air was humid so that breath didn't really help, it just made me more nervous. Great last thing I need! I wipe my sweaty ...

Hello. Just read chapter three of your story. Now judging that I haven't read the last two chapters... I still loved it! It was written so well and I loved ...

Hello, I've just read your lyrics and they're really good. I can easily put a rhythm to them in my head and it flows really well. :D Keep writing, Moonstar ...

Hi really liked your poem. It was different and interesting, not what you'd expect. Only thing I say is that the poem's called 'Heaven and holes ' but you only ...

I fell in love once, With someone just like me. With a silent way of saying, I love you but keep praying. I fell in love once, With constant worry ...

This is probably the most unhelpful review you've ever got but all I can say is that is was BRILLIANT! Moonstar x

Hi to put it simply I loved it! It was very good and I can access what you mean instantly. I've know things like that to go on in my ...