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Re: New Awakenings-Chapter Two
There's some typos, and I think the plot developed too quickly. I'm new here, so I'm a bit confused. But, anyway, the idea is good! :D
Jan 30, 2009
There's some typos, and I think the plot developed too quickly. I'm new here, so I'm a bit confused. But, anyway, the idea is good! :D
Jan 30, 2009
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