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Thanks brolington as always you fab aha and yes u see what you did the there oooooh

Thanks spealwithit, glad you picked up on the emotional detachment!x

Thankyou!x

Thanks! Omg my punctuation saviour aha, i kind of throw my commas in there just as breathers, i mean i know who to use them but i dont in now ...

Thankyou, um glad that youve picked up ok n my punctuation as thats my weakest point so by thats really helpful, thanks. The charcter is inhuman because when she is ...

Thankyou i really appreciate your kind words:)x

This is really clever i like how it starts out with longer sentences and ending with a shorter scentence its like the character is falling asleep, brill. Love it, thanks ...

Thankyou :)