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  • Short Story » Narrative, Culture Re: Altion- The ignorance of suffering

    Thanks and ill take your notes into account %uD83D%uDE0A

    Dec 30, 2013
  • Short Story » Narrative, Culture Re: Altion- The ignorance of suffering

    Thankyou, i'm gad you enjoyed reading it:P

    Dec 20, 2013
  • Short Story » Narrative, Culture Re: Altion- The ignorance of suffering

    Ermahgerd, thankyou pageletelli, i'll get to thoe orrections aha thanks again:P

    Dec 9, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Fanfiction, Science Fiction Re: Chapter one of complications- Illogical Desicions

    Thankyou, and illk have to go throughb thus and edit it the best i can, thanks for reviewing:)

    Nov 11, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Fanfiction, Science Fiction Re: Chapter one of complications- Illogical Desicions

    Thabkyou for your comments ill take them into consideration, and its supposed to be like an intro to spocks relationship with his father .

    Nov 11, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Fanfiction, Science Fiction Re: Chapter one of complications- Illogical Desicions

    Omg sorry the reply on that is terrible, i cant type on a touch screen*face Palm*

    Oct 30, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Fanfiction, Science Fiction Re: Chapter one of complications- Illogical Desicions

    Thankyou for reviewing and i tend to throw commas wherever. it is my weakest point so im glad you picked that out. Im a trekkie fan through abd through, and ...

    Oct 30, 2013
  • Poetry » Romantic, Narrative Re: Most human

    Yeah so its like uhura tapping into spocks enotional side ok n a sense, where inhuman was spick showing uhura that he does have emotions and that he just struggle ...

    Oct 27, 2013
  • Poetry » Romantic, Narrative Re: Most human

    Thankyou, and it was based on star teek between spock and uhura, thus is uhura expresing herself to spock, in a way she thinks that he will understand, thanks again ...

    Oct 27, 2013
  • Poetry » Romantic, Narrative Re: Most human

    Thanks for reviewing and the fanfiction us star trek spock and uhura, i have a story on there called 'the complications of ashaya heh ozhika' thats almost finished. Thanks again. ...

    Oct 27, 2013
  • Poetry » Romantic, Narrative Re: Most human

    Thankyou im so glad you enjoyed it and im glad you liked the ending, it was meant to pack a punch so im pleased to know that it that it ...

    Oct 27, 2013
  • Poetry » Romantic, Narrative Re: Most human

    Thankyou and puncutation is my weakest point ;p

    Oct 27, 2013
  • Poetry » Romantic, Narrative Re: Most human

    Thankyou, sorry for the formattung. And its based in a fanfiction im writing so uts in a way a summary of the emotions in the book, glad you liked ut ...

    Oct 15, 2013
  • Poetry » Romantic, Narrative Re: Most human

    Thankyou brolington, theres a little paragraph that im going to stick with it as well, jst for finesse aha:P, coma's coma's coma's evrywhere.

    Oct 14, 2013
  • Poetry » Romantic, Narrative Re: Most human

    I apologise for the formatting the computer had some sort of melt down on me! Ashayam= beloved Panou=world they are vulcan words from selek starbase10 vld website, which I am ...

    Oct 14, 2013


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