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Re: Mistake
Even though you said this wasn't your best this was actually pretty well written. Kind of reminds me of the hunger games when Katniss sister dies. I think you did ...
Mon Jun 16, 2014 1:53 am -
Re: Selfless Boys- Chapter 1
Hey, I totally think we should write something together. I really like how descriptive you are, and I think you do a really good job of creating vivid imagery. You ...
Mon Jun 16, 2014 12:54 am -
Re: Crimson Red
I love the imagery and you did a great job quickly establishing the mood. Most of the time I find suicidal such a cliché, but yours was different because instead ...
Mon Jun 16, 2014 12:36 am
