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I love this! especially "putting my love in a box" i think you really painted a picture and the flow in your poem is great! for me it was very ...

I'm not entirely sure if this belongs in narrative poetry but i'll give it a try. please comment!! i need all the help i can get!!! A hushed whisper Cold, ...

The beginning is absolutly, i can't even put words to it. it's fantatic! "elizabeth spry doesn't cry, she smirks at the world" it's fanomenal! The way you wrote it made ...

I think this was really beautifully written. It's so sad, but I kind of like that fact that you didn't go with the cookie cutter happy ending. Also when you ...

An hour is only sixty minutes. A day, is only 24 hours. A week, is only seven days. Don't worry, time will fly away. So dry those tears, sweetheart, wipe ...

I do think it was a little cliche, BUT you can add contrast by doing something unexpected. But the girl being cheated on, then going out in the rain and ...

Hi all! Where to start... I'm 16 and an aspiring writer as I guess everyone else is. I live in Argentina (currently in the USA visiting until September) i'm going ...