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I have a problem with tenses too, and I think it's fine if you switch off from chapter to chapter. Just make sure you let the reader know what's going ...

Okay. So first of all...awesome avatar. :smt001 Also, you're right. Naming characters is so difficult sometimes, especially when you want something original, but relatable, yet not so relatable that i

Wow you're an awesome writer! I loved the use of similies (they're my favorite). I definately think you should stick to poetry because I wish I could write them like ...

Aww...that's touching. I live with my grandparents and I know it would suck to have to live through that. As for the piece itself, I think you did really great. ...

ilovemyboys, I was a tad confused. Is this from a girls or guys perspective? Or...could it be a story of two female lovers :shock: ? Perhaps you should do some ...

Aww this is so sweet! I love it. It made me tear up :smt001

evil smile wicked grin your long hair brushes with my chin I take your arm from the bin it falls off, O what a sin! We get ready in our ...

that supposed to be like a bird dragon thingy?? Whatever...ha ha 6/10

Hey there are actually a few things that you could review...take your pick: 1) Triston's proposal-A girl's gaurdian angel proposes to her (Warning: It's in the middle of a chapter ...

Wow... ?/10...

What's the funniest, craziest thing that's happened to you this week?

I had lunch with a squirrel riding a motercycle because I'm NOT crazy :smt001

One time a guy said to me "I've heard a lot of voices but yours sounds really nice..." He had the same comb-over as his older brother and played the ...

I sort of resemble a bird when I get mad... :( Which is...a tad weird.