mollycarraway

“And they lived happily ever after.” Isn’t that how every fairytale is Supposed to end? But it’s true. They did live happily ever after. I watched them. I watched him ...

I've gotta say, I genuinely enjoyed reading this! Maybe it was because I have a poem fairly similar to this, at least in subject matter. But it was fantastic. I ...

Thanks so much for your feedback! Much obliged. :)

Thanks for reading! I think that imagery would be appropriate for most poetry, but here I found that it was essentially useless. I feel like there wasn't much to illustrate ...

I still remember how he felt, His palm, Dry and warm and gentle, Our fingers interlaced. He was the only comfort I had In the dark world I had created ...

Hey Perse, So yeah, it's true, I'll admit I'm not really one for long lines. Maybe it's my mild ADD, but when the lines get too long in a poem ...

Thanks for the feedback, you guys! Yeah, I actually drew this from a personal experience. In fact, when I go to write poetry, I usually try to think back on ...

I close my eyes and I can feel the vibrations, The tenor, The timbre. It echoes through me. It electrifies me. My heart expands. I smile. I reach out of ...

Kylan. I know you told me to review OTHER people's writing, and I HAVE been doing that, but hush up for a minute and let me review your work too. ...

Hi!! First off, let me just say: THIS. IS. BEAUTIFUL. Seriously, it touched me so deeply. (And might I just add that I appreciated the length this time!!) I completely ...

I really really like your poetry!!! And trust me, that's saying something, because more often than not, I have the HARDEST time reading poetry. I hate to be nit-picky, honestly, ...

Ahhhh this is so cute!! I really liked it, especially because of how true it is. My only suggestion /would/ be to lengthen it a bit. I'm sure you could ...

It’s that pivotal moment: That moment where you realize That life won’t be anything near Where you had anticipated it. It’s disorienting, And you feel reality slicing your soul away ...

I know you said this was old stuff, and that you write so much better now. But WOW! I honestly cannot even begin to express how impressed I am with ...

I've already told you this in person, but I just wanted to reiterate the fact that I love it so very much. I think I'm automatically drawn to anything... haunting. ...