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Re: The F.U.N. Song.
This is so cute!!!! Hahahaa I imagined it as being sung really loudly and obnoxiously , but I loved it! Now someone needs to come up with a melody for ...
Jun 3, 2011 -
Re: Of Love
Do you ever have those moments where someones words speak to you in a different way that they speak to others? THAT is the kind of poetry I look for, ...
Jun 3, 2011 -
Re: OKay inspiration...
Ok, so here's my take on this piece. I think you started and ended it REALLY well. I always prefer poems that don't focus on details and drown you in ...
May 27, 2011 -
Re: Fall Apart
Hi there! I'm kinda excited to be the first to read and reply to this poem. I braced myself, of course, when you warned readers that you weren't very good ...
May 27, 2011 -
Re: The Pink Balloon (Part 1)
The Pink Balloon Part 1 I doubt that I could ever forget what I'm about to tell you. There was a house, seemingly insignificant. I figured it probably would have ...
May 7, 2011 -
Re: Wasted.
So I read your little intro first, and thus I wasn't super confused when it came to knowing about the two intertwined topics and the alternating lines. However, when I ...
May 7, 2011 -
Re: Wasted.
So I read your little intro first, and thus I wasn't super confused when it came to knowing about the two intertwined topics and the alternating lines. However, when I ...
May 7, 2011 -
Re: Fairytale II (I Told You So)
How do you think it feels to be torn between A mistake and An unattainable dream? He was beautiful, wonderful, smart and compassionate He was perfection, And my heart yearned ...
May 7, 2011 -
Re: Hope
Very few things in life cause me to hold my breath in anticipation. I am pleased to tell you that this poem was one of those few things. The wording ...
May 5, 2011 -
Re: See life is beautiful?
This was a really nice poem. I really liked how in the beginning, it focused on pleasant things. And they weren't just pleasant things in general, but little specifics. Maybe ...
May 5, 2011 -
Re: Disasterpiece
I gotta say, this is really impressive! I love how you took something so common, something so often taken for granted or ignored, and you gave it relatable life. I ...
Apr 23, 2011 -
Re: Weakness
Huff Puff - Thank you for the review! I'm glad you enjoyed it. :)
Apr 22, 2011 -
Re: Weakness
I may not shed a tear But beneath the surface A river flows through my heart And my soul is shards of glass And they tear me apart. Fourteen years ...
Apr 22, 2011 -
Re: Yo, whuddup??
I used to write random stories. They were usually pretty ridiculous, but the talent was there. Now I write mostly poems. I'm trying to get back into story writing, though. ...
Apr 22, 2011 -
Re: Yo, whuddup??
Hey there, everyone! I'm new here. And it took me forever to figure out how to do this 'lil post thingy as an introduction. So yeah. I'm Molly. I like ...
Apr 21, 2011
