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Re: Daddy
Hi there!!! Ok, I have to start out by saying that this poem is absolutely stunning. I have heard many a friend talk about their feelings towards the father they ...
Aug 1, 2011 -
Re: New Life
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Aug 1, 2011 -
Re: Hopes And Fears
I've got a couple poems in my poetry folder! You should check them out.
Jul 30, 2011 -
Re: Hopes And Fears
I don't think anyone is getting the fact that this is NOT a poem. This is a song. It's not supposed to make sense, and it's not going to be ...
Jul 28, 2011 -
Re: Death of The New Age
Hi there! So I really liked this poem. It was short, sweet, and to the point. The only thing I would comment on is: Barren land where nothing grows. It ...
Jul 28, 2011 -
Re: Harry Potter and the Chamber of Secrets (Twitterized)
Once again, I just love it. Keep them coming, PLEASE!!
Jul 28, 2011 -
Re: Harry Potter and the Philosopher's Stone (Twitterized)
Ok, this was stinkin' FUNNY!!! Can I put in a request that you do this to the rest of the books?? Thanks for making my work day that much less ...
Jul 28, 2011 -
Re: Scream Of New Life
Hey there! So yes, I will agree with the above two reviews, about the 3rd person and 1st person switch. It didn't bother me too much, but others might not ...
Jul 28, 2011 -
Re: Hopes And Fears
He reads me like the Bible, Making little notes in all my margins, Finds meaning in my thoughts and withered heart, Turns the page and brings me to myself. I ...
Jul 28, 2011 -
Re: The Silence of Laughter
WOW!!! That is amazing. I LOVE poetry I can relate to, and this just spoke straight to my heart. Haha and I know that sounds cheesy and cliche, but I ...
Jul 28, 2011 -
Re: I Will Miss The Crows
Summertime is a mixture of sweet and loud. Cicadas are almost deafening And you can’t listen to the cicadas without lemonade. My childhood footsteps run down through the grass and ...
Jul 28, 2011 -
Re: This is not a Love Poem
For all that this is not a love poem, I still found myself longing for someone to share those moments with that you've described. The way you boldly declare that ...
Jul 11, 2011 -
Re: ghost
Hey Perse!! I'm so excited, I get to be the first to review this poem!! I always love reading your works, they're all so thought-provoking. I'm extremely interested to know ...
Jul 11, 2011 -
Re: Human Clay
Thank you so much!!! That means a lot to me!! :)
Jul 10, 2011 -
Re: Human Clay
I have been up for hours. The thunder isn’t what keeps sleep away, Even though its power shakes The entire house. It isn’t the lightning either, So bright, like white ...
Jul 9, 2011
