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mollycarraway

  • Fantasy Novels Re: Labyrinth: Chapter One

    More more more!! I'll be looking out for the rest of this :D

    Aug 23, 2011
  • Romantic Short Stories Re: The little things between us

    THIS IS SO BEAUTIFUL!!!!!! Ok, now that I got that out, I have to say, good job!!! You've conveyed your emotions fabulously, and the beautiful thing about it is that ...

    Aug 23, 2011
  • General Articles Re: The Silence of Pain

    I wonder what they’re doing right now. Actually, I don’t. I don’t want to think about it. I won’t think about it. The world is absolutely silent tonight, except for ...

    Aug 22, 2011
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Wanting to end it all

    Hi there! Ok, so I really liked the idea of this poem. And if you were intending for it to be only 3 lines, then that's great. However, for this ...

    Aug 19, 2011
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Tristesse

    Stunning. Absolutely lovely. :D And yes, Chopin is the best. Ever.

    Aug 19, 2011
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Till we meet again

    Hi there! So, I really liked this. It's such an emotional piece, and such emotion is very hard to express in words. I commend you for that. I hate to ...

    Aug 18, 2011
  • Other Poetry Re: low tide

    Oh hey, it's a beachy ocean poem. :) I like it.

    Aug 17, 2011
  • Other Re: Deliver Us From Evil

    She’s a wonderful woman, really she is. She has a soft nature about her, something like the gentle footsteps of an elderly cat; slow but deliberate, with many more years ...

    Aug 5, 2011
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: The playground is burning

    Stunning. Absolutely incredible. I love it, seriously I do. The formatting is really engaging, too. I love how it's always in the future tense, and constantly switching back and forth ...

    Aug 5, 2011
  • Other Poetry Re: maidenhood (and a tale of two cities)

    i am eerie with lights— Seems to be everyones favorite line. And, not surprisingly, it has stuck with me ever since you first repeated it to me on our way ...

    Aug 2, 2011
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Eleven:Eleven

    Ahhhhhhh!!!!!!!!!!! *fangirl scream* I have said this before and I will say it again for the rest of my life: I LOVE POETRY THAT I CAN RELATE TO. And this, ...

    Aug 1, 2011
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Innocence of a Child

    This was so beautiful!!! I like it a lot, and I want you to expand on it. First off, there's this stanza: So I will dream and cry, for just ...

    Aug 1, 2011
  • Lyrics Re: Mid-Love Crisis

    This is so cute!!! I love it :D I've said this before (not specifically to you, but in general), but I love pieces that I can relate to. And this... ...

    Aug 1, 2011
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Body vs. Mind

    Hi there!! So, this was quite lovely, I've gotta say. I love how it describes that internal struggle that so many people go through. It's not an easy thing to ...

    Aug 1, 2011
  • General Fiction Novels Re: The Massiveness of How Sad It Is to Want Someone (1)

    Hi there!! First of all: WOW! I've gotta say, I'm QUITE impressed. I've read way too many stories about sad kids that wanna take their own lives, and they all ...

    Aug 1, 2011


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