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Re: Labyrinth: Chapter One
More more more!! I'll be looking out for the rest of this :D
Aug 23, 2011 -
Re: The little things between us
THIS IS SO BEAUTIFUL!!!!!! Ok, now that I got that out, I have to say, good job!!! You've conveyed your emotions fabulously, and the beautiful thing about it is that ...
Aug 23, 2011 -
Re: The Silence of Pain
I wonder what they’re doing right now. Actually, I don’t. I don’t want to think about it. I won’t think about it. The world is absolutely silent tonight, except for ...
Aug 22, 2011 -
Re: Wanting to end it all
Hi there! Ok, so I really liked the idea of this poem. And if you were intending for it to be only 3 lines, then that's great. However, for this ...
Aug 19, 2011 -
Re: Tristesse
Stunning. Absolutely lovely. :D And yes, Chopin is the best. Ever.
Aug 19, 2011 -
Re: Till we meet again
Hi there! So, I really liked this. It's such an emotional piece, and such emotion is very hard to express in words. I commend you for that. I hate to ...
Aug 18, 2011 -
Re: low tide
Oh hey, it's a beachy ocean poem. :) I like it.
Aug 17, 2011 -
Re: Deliver Us From Evil
She’s a wonderful woman, really she is. She has a soft nature about her, something like the gentle footsteps of an elderly cat; slow but deliberate, with many more years ...
Aug 5, 2011 -
Re: The playground is burning
Stunning. Absolutely incredible. I love it, seriously I do. The formatting is really engaging, too. I love how it's always in the future tense, and constantly switching back and forth ...
Aug 5, 2011 -
Re: maidenhood (and a tale of two cities)
i am eerie with lights— Seems to be everyones favorite line. And, not surprisingly, it has stuck with me ever since you first repeated it to me on our way ...
Aug 2, 2011 -
Re: Eleven:Eleven
Ahhhhhhh!!!!!!!!!!! *fangirl scream* I have said this before and I will say it again for the rest of my life: I LOVE POETRY THAT I CAN RELATE TO. And this, ...
Aug 1, 2011 -
Re: Innocence of a Child
This was so beautiful!!! I like it a lot, and I want you to expand on it. First off, there's this stanza: So I will dream and cry, for just ...
Aug 1, 2011 -
Re: Mid-Love Crisis
This is so cute!!! I love it :D I've said this before (not specifically to you, but in general), but I love pieces that I can relate to. And this... ...
Aug 1, 2011 -
Re: Body vs. Mind
Hi there!! So, this was quite lovely, I've gotta say. I love how it describes that internal struggle that so many people go through. It's not an easy thing to ...
Aug 1, 2011 -
Re: The Massiveness of How Sad It Is to Want Someone (1)
Hi there!! First of all: WOW! I've gotta say, I'm QUITE impressed. I've read way too many stories about sad kids that wanna take their own lives, and they all ...
Aug 1, 2011
