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  • Fantasy Novels Re: Ogygia-part 6

    Weaving is not a suitable replacement for sketching Calypso thought with her teeth clenched, wrestling with the silky, colorful threads. The whole thing confused her. Where did the thread go? ...

    Jun 2, 2011
  • Historical Fiction Novels Re: One Country, Two Worlds [Part 1]

    Hi :) I really love historical fiction, especially civil war. My family fought for the south, even though they were from West Virginia. I like reading the kind that shows ...

    Mar 23, 2011
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: deleted

    Hey :) here as promised again. This was really good, and it proved a great point. People don't always realize the horrors going on right before their eyes. Thats why ...

    Mar 23, 2011
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: deleted

    This was a nice poem, short, sweet, and to the point. There are a few things though. First stanza- space after the comma in the fourth line Second stanza- Third ...

    Mar 23, 2011
  • Other Poetry Re: The Storm

    Hey, moderncalypso here to review for you! I like this poem, but it doens't seem very poetic to me. It is a little hard to read and the format of ...

    Mar 23, 2011
  • Other Poetry Re: Echo

    I thought this was a cute poem, I didn't really mind the shortness. My only problem with is some of the lines don't seem to fit right. They seem too ...

    Mar 23, 2011
  • Narrative Poetry Re: A Lesson In Love

    Hey Ranger, thought I would stop by. I liked this poem, and I felt like I could relate in certian parts, since my parents are divorced (This is Sakuragirl1 speaking, ...

    Mar 23, 2011
  • Fantasy Novels Re: Ogygia-part five

    The blue and white fishing boat loomed overhead, providing shade from the pounding afternoon sun. Up close, it looked battered, with peeling paint and splinter-infested wood. On the outside it ...

    Mar 17, 2011
  • Fantasy Novels Re: Ogygia-part 4

    Calypso and Adonis whirled around to face the woman in the doorway. "Aphrodite!" Calypso cried. Her heart started pounding wildly. "Hello, Calypso," The goddess said with a smirk. Calypso did ...

    Mar 6, 2011
  • Fantasy Novels Re: Ogygia-Part 3

    Athena's silvery loom clicked back forth. Calypso sat Indian-style on the bed, waiting for Athena to start the story. "The blind poet Homer once told the story of the Odyssey. ...

    Feb 26, 2011
  • Fantasy Novels Re: Ogygia-part 2

    Calypso stared blankly out to sea. The helicopter had dropped her off around an hour before, and that was all the time it took to explore the tiny island. It ...

    Feb 4, 2011
  • Fantasy Novels Re: Ogygia-part one

    edited!

    Jan 23, 2011
  • Fantasy Novels Re: Ogygia-part one

    Calypso Baros screamed, the sound muffled through the padded white walls of her cell. This was the way it had been for the last six days. Nobody talked to her, ...

    Jan 23, 2011


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