mnkeygrl11

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MY REVIEWS ARE GOLDEN Heyo! I see that a lot of lovely people have decided to review things for people, so I figured that I'd give it a go, too! ...

Hi! I'm working on a fantasy novel right now, and I was wondering if you could review the first page and 1/2 or so before I continue with the chapter? ...

Wow, I am so bored I think my dad just snored My brother went out to get the paper I hope he chokes on a light saver It sort of ...

Sirens blared. People screamed. Soldiers marched and called out battle crys in the distance. These were the sounds of the world ending and I was very confused. Wasn't the world ...

Ok, so I suggest that you put more sentences in each paragraph. I realize that this is a short story and I can understand your story just fine, it's just ...

I honestly liked it, although I have a few suggestions! 1. I've noticed that you're missing a few words here and there, and your writing gets kind of confusing when ...

Hey I've edited the first few pages... Here is the link: http://mnkeygrl11.writerfeedpad.com:9000/1 Feel free to edit anything you wish! I actually prefer it that way, because then I can see ...

Thanks! I'll be editing it! :D I usually put two spaces, but it kind of got messes up when I copied aand pasted it!

Don't Open this until your ready, Alexa. Those seven words were written in sharpie across my sister's leather bound diary, the same one she had gotten at the Renaissance Fair ...