mnesomeye

WOO - new chapters! But I've decided I'm fed up of just leaving you fan-girlish comments; they aren't beneficial to anyone. *laughs* So I've decided to take my nit-pickiness to ...

Hiya! Decided to take up your challenge and rip your plan-type-thing to shreds (although, in fairness, it's not really a 'challenge' as ripping to shreds is how I review! ;) ...

YAY, 21st chapter! However, as with every brilliant story, I scoured it demonically for errors. It was obvious how he felt about her… to everyone but her. Put emphasis on ...

Hiya antipop! Why do you have to read 'My Dearest Madylene' first? This story doesn't appear to be related... unless they come together towards the end, or something? Or - ...

Oh, the ANGUISH! *cries* This was beautiful - drop-dead, fantastically, amazingly beautiful. However, as with every beautiful piece, there comes the itch to make it better - *whips out a ...

Hiya Vox! I've come to rescue you and make sure that this piece of work is "uh, really good". :P This review will probably be very picky, but... well, you ...

First thoughts? Dang - this is good. I really enjoyed reading this, to the point that it became a challenge to try and find any sort of flaw. Well uh ...

This is... interesting. But I'm not sure what the poem is about, so I can't critique it. Can you tell me? OK that sounded rather bad - I understand it's ...

EDIT: Ok! Let's get reviewin'! *pulls out her special pastel pink, glass nibbed pen* This first part of my review seems - no, IS - very mean, but seriously, there ...

I hereby claim myself to be the first reviewer! *waves a flag happily in the air* But err... I gotta write the review. Back in half an hour.

Heya - nice job, Vox! This was v. interesting to read, and you've kept us in suspense throughout the entire thing. Not many people can pull that off, so congrats. ...

*squeals* I can never critique any of your work! It's too perfect. So I shan't do it.

Hi again - here for a second time to check out your improvements! ^_^ I'll run through all the things I think that you could perhaps think about messing about ...

*screams hysterically and collapses to floor* Dammit. Another cliff hanger. =_= I found another story like this over on FF.net, so I'm dissecting that one instead ;P What is it ...

*gasps and sprints to next chapter*