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Re: Stars
Firstly. The reviewer above is, like myself, a grammar hoar. However, I really do feel that her grammar is so proper that it's missed the point of this work entirely. ...
Mar 6, 2009 -
Re: No Originality!
On one hand , I totally agree. Cartoons now are so stupid, the entire point of them has been lost. Did you see what they did to the Scooby Doo ...
Mar 6, 2009 -
Re: In Memory of Shaun Dykes...
Here is the article: Two hundred people watched this boy die. I don't care if it was only a small portion of the crowd that were shouting jeers at him; ...
Jan 15, 2009 -
Re: Because - Chap. 24
I'm not a fan of 'overall' reviews, so I've done another of my nit-picks. Ain't I fab? :roll: So on Wednesday, November 19th, 2008 No, far too many commas here. ...
Jan 8, 2009 -
Re: Veiled Soul
Hiya, c'est moi *bows* and I decided that just signing your guest book wasn't enough. So I'll give you a couple of reviews, as most of the comments on here ...
Dec 21, 2008 -
Re: --Online Writing Contest for Charity--
Ahhhhh. Oh dear. I don't have a credit card OR a Facebook/MySpace profile: the card I sent off for STILL hasn't arrived and it's been over two weeks, and I ...
Dec 21, 2008 -
Re: Just One Of Those Days (I)
OK guys, this is my first EVER story on YWS, so please, I beg of you, rip it to shreds and feed 'em to the dogs if you have to. ...
Dec 20, 2008 -
Re: Just One Of Those Days (I)
Thanks to the people who reviewed this, but I agree, I used waaay too much description here. So, it's dead now. :D (Got bored of it anyway.)
Dec 20, 2008 -
Re: The Triangle Effect
Hi, it's me again! I'm going to give you a proper once-over this time; a Mnesomeye special! *claps* Be warned, though; I'm a perfectionist, and I love nothing more than ...
Dec 20, 2008 -
Re: The Triangle Effect
I understand that people think loveablelittlesocks' critique was too harsh, but most of it needed to be said. Perhaps a little more tactfully, though. ;) However, seeing as LLS (loveablelittlesocks) ...
Dec 19, 2008 -
Re: Should you give change to the homeless?
Yep. People have already said 'it's what God told us to do', so I'm not gonna go on about it. But even if that person then went off and bought ...
Dec 19, 2008 -
Re: Are cliches a bad thing?
YES, I hate them I hate them I hate them! Especially in movies, where they do some real intense close up of a character and he says something we've heard ...
Dec 19, 2008 -
Re: Evil Humans
I believe we're born as selfish little buggers that need to be taught better by our parents. Unfortunately, because of society these days, and the impersonalisation of everything (ooh, long ...
Dec 19, 2008 -
Re: Twilight vs. Harry potter
Harry Potter all the way. Twilight is, for me, ranks at the same level as Meg Cabot (who, in my opinion, fails). It was recently described as a 'modern day ...
Dec 19, 2008 -
Re: Because - Chap. 23
*pulls out her pastel pink, glass nibbed fountain pen again* They were smothering me, just as they had done right after [s]all of it happened[/s] it had all happened / ...
Dec 19, 2008
