mmeshanni

Thank you, both of you. and there is no need to apologize for being "nitpicky." thank you for your suggestions! :)

thank you so much :) I'm glad you liked the poem!

thank you all for your critiques! :D I'm glad you all liked it

Hey, I just wanted to thank everyone for critiquing my poem I'm glad that you all liked it, and I hope you will continue to read my poems as I ...

Thank you vampire :D and yea, i guess it does flow better. Thank you tgirly