mlowe16

You can relate to this. It's beautiful, no changes needed. Keep it the way it is, i dont care what anybody says.

Good. But, it seem's like you would have to be close friends with you to understand it. Help the reader understand it better, give it more detail and feeling. Other ...

THANK YOU FOR READING IT OMG!:D wow, ok well its one of those coincidental moments with her, the boy walks over. this between them is ment to be. I have ...

Ok I'm not here to correct your grammar. You wanted a title and that's what I will give you. I think it should be "Forgive." or "Remember" you need a ...

Beautiful. It has feeling. I love it.

This is really good. And descriptive, and just.. keeps you wanting more. Dont be so hard on yourself, I didnt see any mistakes and this book is really good. Keep ...

How in the heck do you get points?

Writing, is like a type of life style. You just let the words rule you over, take over your life and become who you are. Stories are your number one ...

There he was. A living dream, a breathing fantasy, a beautiful memory, now standing right in front of me. At the pier Here I am. A regular girl, regular height, ...