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Wow. This was a short but really deep poem. To tell you the truth I've always wondered about death in this way. Ermm... as for the nitpicks, nothing major that ...

Hey soconfused! Don't be confused! I think I reviewed a poem of yours. Last Kiss was it?? It was great!! I don't see why you're so hesitant to post up ...

Heyy, Iheartu. (I like your username by the way!) Welcome Aboard. Aww don't be shy. And don't worry, you'll feel comfortable at YWS right away. Everyones friendly and really helpful ...

So I've rewritten the poem. Better now?? I tried really hard on this. What do you guys think?

Hey Monica!! I just recently reviewed your story I think. Well anyways Welcome Aboard!! I'd love to check out your artwork on Deviant Art. If it's all right with you ...

Ooooh this is a great idea! Though personally, I tend to use creative name. Not necessarily made up ones, but I like unique names. And even if they are made ...

No No. No need to re-think the whole thing. I think this is an amazing start to a novel. Very exciting and thrilling. The descriptions were great, though I would ...

This is rather short so I can't say much. Even though it's quite short it caught my attention and it was quite interesting. I hope you continue this. Just a ...

Hey there Red Panda! I have to go somewhere quickly but this story caught my eye and I'll try to make this review quick. I'm not going focus on punctuation, ...

Hey there! Welcome to YWS! We're all addicts here, so welcome aboard. If you have any questions or need any help feel free to PM me.

Welcome Back! I second JFW1415. -see you around.

Hehe. That was a rally nice story and I enjoyed the humor! It was much much better and easier to read once you spaced everything out. But no worries, now ...

Ok one quick thing. I'd love to read this as it sound very interesting. But you need to space this out into paragraphs... double space them. Its one huge block ...

Just in case there is any confusion: This is not a love poem. Yes I can see how this poem sound too scattered. I think it would do well if ...

HEyy Leah, Welcome to YWS! I think probably Fantasy.