mizz-iceberg

Ditto to everyone above. YWS will definitely help you 'delve deeper'. Oh muffins! *Takes a muffin from Alaina. Thank you.* Oh and yes, Welcome to YWS!!!!!!!! Feel free to PM ...

Hey there Book worm! I'll first point out some things and then give you my over all opinion. Kareena swished her long violent purple hair out of her eyes and ...

Hey Marty! Wow ^ that's sad. There's nothing much I can say about this except that carry on writing it. I was extremely touched and you brought out your emotion ...

Don't let Vernon discourage you. He can be rather blunt, but he only means well. All the things he pointed out are true. But I think this poem is actually ...

This was amusing, not HAHAHA funny but amusing type funny... (??) I'm sometimes at a loss of words to explain my self and end up over explaining which just ends ...

I agree with Niteowl. Another thing I noticed is that you are being rather careless with your grammar. I reviewed another poem of yours just today an I noticed it ...

Hey Me too! I want a high five.

Hey Tess, welcome to YWS! Personally, I'd rather hear the babble. After all this is your thread, help us get to know you better. :D If you have any questions ...

Hey Demeter! Welcome To YWS!! Finland.. wow... brrr. Anyways, I'm Mizz Iceberg, you can call, Mizz, Icy, Zehra... whatever you please. I'm sure you'll have lots of fun here. See ...

Ok I can see that you're trying very hard to convey some special feelings to the reader but I'm having a hard grasping exactly what you're message is. Your poem ...

Hey there! Welcome to YWS! I see that you're new. I have to say adored your description, especially the first bit, it created a wonderful mood for the story. Fog ...

-I changed Candle of my soul to My soul's candle. (though doesn't 'Candle of my soul' sound nicer on the tongue?? But I guess I shouldn't let sounds deviate me ...

Yes I didn't know that either. Lol. I don't know why I wrote werewolf up there. I meant vampire. :D But I think you got my point ;)

Hey, Maya Welcome to YWS! Feel free to PM me if you need help or have any question. Make sure you have fun! See you around.

Hi! I got you PM and so here I am! It was much nicer to see more of this, as I've gotten to know the characters and setting better. I ...