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Re: The World Police
Clograbby, I couldn't have said it better. Frankly put, America needs to start minding their own business and sort out their priorities. On the bright side, America is capable of ...
Jul 31, 2008 -
Re: newbie here
HI!! Welcome aboard! I'm also here if you need any help. See we're helpful friendly folk. I'm sure you'll have a blast here. See you around!!
Jul 31, 2008 -
Re: Introducing
HOWDY Camm!! (feeling cowboy-ish today) Welcome to YWS!!!!! So if you're like most new members you're probably slightly confused about what's going on around here. And that's dandy! But we're ...
Jul 31, 2008 -
Re: Should we take the troops out of Iraq?
Shouldn't this whole problem be left to the Iraqis? If they want the troops or not. It's up to them. Why is US deciding what's good for Iraq when a ...
Jul 25, 2008 -
Re: Hey!
Yes this sure is it!! Hi! I'm Mizz Iceberg! Welcome to YWS! The site may seem very confusing at first but I'm sure you'll get get comfortable pretty soon. Most ...
Jul 25, 2008 -
Re: Off the Charts
Nice poem! It has a nice rhythm and flows well. Kudos for that. This was my favourite part : The Sun is not there, The Moon won't shine. Nobody is ...
Jul 23, 2008 -
Re: Hi
HI! Welcome to YWS! I'm also here if you ever need help! We're helpful people so don't hesitate to ask anyone if ever confused. Be sure to check out the ...
Jul 23, 2008 -
Re: 'To Kill a Mockingbird'
I loved it! I thought it was one of the best books I've ever read. Call me a crack pot if you want but I love classics. It was truly ...
Jul 17, 2008 -
Re: Hello!
Don't worry Lulu, that means you'll really fit in! ;)
Jul 17, 2008 -
Re: 'Sup
Welcome Qultur! Yea this is the 'write' (my corny humor) site for you if you enjoy writing. Make sure you read the rules and guides and be sure to check ...
Jul 17, 2008 -
Re: Force of Two
I can't say much about this piece as it's very short. If you write more let me know and I'd love to critique.
Jul 16, 2008 -
Re: Waiting for you
Well it's rather short but I'm hooked! Can't wait to read more. Yes this piece was rough in a few places but nothing major. I found it rather poetical as ...
Jul 16, 2008 -
Re: Hello!
Hey Lulu!! I'm happy to meet you! No problem at all, as you get started you'll learn more about this site an the rules. And even though Curly has explained ...
Jul 16, 2008 -
Re: A letter to my beloved-I did not die
I can see this comes from the heart. Yes I agree this is a sweet poem. The Nitpicks: For i did not die I am the moon that lights up ...
Jul 16, 2008 -
Re: a very good question
Hey!! Interesting poem. I don't necessarily agree with your views but the structure of the poem was good and the words used well. It made sense and you conveyed your ...
Jul 16, 2008
