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Salaams Sam! I'll echo everyones comments before and say that I loved this. The descriptions were great! Everything flowed so well. I also liked the random humor. It kept me ...

This is another entry for her contest. Of course I will only submit one. My other entry is called After Rain. No. 6 Snowflakes I bang at the door. “Mom! ...

I highly highly recommended reading the short story, The Bet written by Anton Chekhov. Here's the link you can read it here: It pretty much sums up my opinion of ...

That's the stuff! I like your enthusiasm about your writing! Let me know when you have made the changes andI'll review it again. :D

I just think we all have different definition of what 'evil' truly is... What would be the perfectly evil man be like? The one with the sinister face, secret lair? ...

ZOMG ZOMG! This reminds me of one of my favourite songs by NAtasha Bedingfield. It's called Soul Mate and I highly, highly reccemond you to listen to the song, read ...

The Problem I love the plot. The story, the whole outline is great! However that's what it is right now just a plot. Your piece looks more like a detailed ...

Hello Dev! I'll check out your story right away. Welcome to YWS by the way! I hope you have a great time here. PM me if you ever need anything. ...

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Thank you guys for your comments. I understand what you mean Olivia about it needing more description. I tried to make vague, but I guess I got carried away. I'll ...

Living in Karachi, I run into beggars on a daily basis. I used to feel uncomfortable giving money to them because I do believe it encourages them to beg. They ...

Living in Karachi, I run into beggars on a daily basis. I used to feel uncomfortable giving money to them because I do believe it encourages them to beg. They ...

Sunlight "It's pretty." She mumbled a soft smile on her face. He leaned back against the fence and closed his eyes, his face uplifted towards the sun. He looked celestial ...

Hello! This is fresh, touching piece. I'll just first go through the nitpicks quickly... They say that legend often becomes fact, so before my reputation is completely ruined I want ...

Clo's Contest. A Softer World No. 3. January 21st 1999 They’re dead. All of them. Gone. Just plain gone. It should hurt to think about it. But it doesn’t hurt. ...