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Try to make the nose finer... I don't like his messy stubble, it makes him look messy and old. The shadow under his eye makes him look tired and old-ish. ...

Sarah> Thanks for pointing all this out, I'll definitely get to the editing now. I like harsh critiques; that way I can really improve! PerpetualBhridge> I'm glad you enjoyed this ...

Hello Sarah! Can you please review this for me: Thank you!

I know you have many critiques to do but if you don't mind doing reviewing mine, that would be awesome!! It's a short story. Please and thank you! -Zehra

Could you please review this for me? Please and thank you, -Zehra

*GASPS* You live in such a pretty place! I love the mountains in the back. The quality isn't that good though. It's a tad blurry. Still, that doesn't take too ...

Welcome Ava! Greeaaaaaaaaat to meet you! I'm Zehra. If you ever need help, a critique or just want to talk don't hesitate to PM me. I'm sure you'll have a ...

Welcome to YWS! I see that you are a new member! ;) It would a good idea to introduce yourself in the Welcome Forum. In case you don't know YWS ...

Yoohoo Snoink! Name: Snowflakes Genre: Other Fiction Summary: It's about a girl who's Mother locks her out in the cold. Word count: 1,173 Link: Note: It's for Clo's A Softer ...

There was Goosebumps! You gotta remember those! They were hideously crappy, lol, and I hated them. Yet obviously a lot of people loved them... and still do. Why? ....I'm not ...

We know how it was created, but saying that a God started the process is a bit ignorant, do you not agree? Cytochrome-C is one of the most important proteins ...

Big mistake my friend. Do not EVER try to tell me what I believe, and that I must admit the Bible can be wrong. If you believe that, fine, but ...

Twilight killed Twilight. End of story. *Nods* 'Nuff said.

YAY! I must be in this one! :D as soon as I figure out what the time will be for me...

These are so cool. If you don't mind I'm going to use a few...