mitkay

You got me there, but after you just drop me like "I just wrote this." I was so into it wanting more, I wanted to feel that passion, how he ...

Thanks Shah

Thank you Kazey, but I feel like it would be better without it anyway, but thanks anyway.

It might not be the best poem, but I'm trying.

This is such a beautiful poem. I think it would've been great if you had put some periods, because you want to read this and pause. That might just be ...

I really like the poem but I had to re-read it to understand what you were talking about. Keep up the great work.

I get what you're saying,I tried to fix those but it wouldn't let me, but thanks I appreciate it.

Thanks