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Re: Shoes
Oh! This is excellent! It flows together extremely well and the rhyming is superb. I'm impressed :D. I do have one suggestion, just that "Or would we forget them on ...
May 1, 2008 -
Re: True Reflections
This has amazing imagery! A bit depressing, but I imagine that's the effect you were going off, so I like it a ton. I especially love the line "Dipping in ...
May 1, 2008