mirandamaddness

It's funny cause it's the horrible truth. I just have a few problems with yor flow. I am a weirdo everyone says so. I am a weirdo. Everyone says so. ...

I personaly would change a few things... Wild flowers are like love... it flows... I would say: Wild flowers are like love... The two flow (insert adverb here)... the love ...

Well I see what your trying to do. *wink wink* :wink: I wonder where you got this idea from :roll: . *points to self...grins...teeheehee* :lol: The two people walked... ~Star

I love it and I really have nothing to complain about here. And if you need help with writing go to poetry disscussion (sp?) and tips. That's the same for ...

I love it! It really explains how words are better than actiona and how powerfull writers are. I really have no complaints here. Keep up the good work!!! ~Star

I'm wondering have you ever read Twilight by Stephanie Meyer? Well...if you have it sounds like it... :wink: Anyway it's a great poem that can have a lot of meanings...I ...

From the month of December: I love the way... I feel when you say... That you love me... And I feel so lucky to have you... Duh-duh-duuuuuuuuhhhhh... what shall you ...

I have nothing to complain about except a little more detail on what your characters look like. Bring them to life! Right now they're stick figures...soon they can be rounded ...

I just noticed this: Suzanne said: My only other issue with it is the fact that you never capitalize the pronoun I. Please respect grammar? Why do you need to ...

Here... I'll start... Just continue... Every month I'll gather up what we have and post it together... I love the way...

This looks cool...hmmm...*thinks hard*...got it! my name: Is anything you want it to be... i am: An almost ordinary girl... i wonder: Why... i hear: The whisper of magic... i ...

Interesting suggestions... This was a kinda inspiration-gotta-write-it-down thing... Not my best work...

I would cahnge a few things here: sometimes I sit or stand still [s]and I think of a different place a different time[/s] and I thinkof a different place a ...

She watches over me When it's dark in the sky Her twinkling daughters Are my friends and my family When she shows her fullest face I long to float up ...

I'm going to die if I don't find out what happens!!!!!!!! Trust me, that means I love it already.