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Re: The Chess Set (part 3 out of 3) resubmitted and reformatted
jennydragonlover: I enjoyed all three parts of The Chess Set! I really liked how you ended it, it seems right to end there and not continue. I think that it ...
Jan 16, 2008 -
Re: The Chess Set (part 2 out of 3) resubmitted and reformatted
I'm back again! Jennydragonlover your writing still amazes me more, the ending of your part 2 wasn't a really good place to end in my opinion. I like the way ...
Jan 16, 2008 -
Re: The Chess Set (part 1 out of 3) resubmitted and reformatted
Hi jennydragonlover! You told me to reply your writing so here I am! It's really good and suspenseful part to end. Great and realistic dialogue that makes the characters seem ...
Jan 16, 2008 -
Re: An Imaginary Hero
“Thumps wake up!” A large rabbit called out. A white rabbit with grey streaks wearily looked up and stared at her mother. “Mommy, why did you have to wake me ...
Jan 16, 2008
