mintantlers

“Do you think that it looks normal?” Luster inquired looking at the house. Skidia shrugged. “I don’t know.” She muttered, Lily blinked innocently at Luster who sighed. “Man, it doesn’t ...

“Skidia!” Luster cried out happily, he was really glad that she had come so he didn’t need to face another heir. Skidia just ignored his yells and continued to glare ...

“Man, Skidia do you think that you can give me a hand on cleaning this mess?” Luster asked as he inspected the damage of the battle. Skidia scanned the rooms ...

Hi guys! I hope you liked it, thanks for the feedback. It's really helpful but then again I'm not that great at grammar to sorry! I'll try my best though! ...

Hey guys! On my other works I'll try and brush up on my description, plot, characters, and grammar! Please read and review my other works! Thanks!

I really like how the story flows along really nicely. There's great characterizaton and the characters have their own personality that you can easily tell apart. The beginning is a ...

“Luster, you have to promise to take good care of Lily and yourself okay? It’ll just be about two days. The food is already prepared and labeled in the freezer. ...

Really great description in there, I loved you sensory details and how you really went in and started talking about everything. Great job! Good luck on your next story starters!

I really loved your story. It's a really nice ending that you put, I liked how the main character's perspective changed when he had that dream. But the way that ...

Hi! I really liked how you made the plot. I really wanted to know more about Mr. Wizard and why he helped Chirp. Why was Chirp so trusting? I want ...

Hey! I think that you wrote pretty well. There were a few typos like you wrote spin instead of spine. :(':smt075') (':smt075') Several grammar mistakes, (I suck at grammar too!) ...

“Now I have to make sure I have a lot of snacks or else that creepy girl will kill me!” Luster was rummaging through the kitchen cupboards and drawers and ...

Hi, I liked your story, it was pretty good. But I think that you should fix the spacing of the story. It looks like a giant mass of words and ...

Really bloody and violent sounding story. I really liked how you ended it. Good descriptions on the monster that was chasing the protagonist, I liked how you described the main ...

Large topaz, catlike eyes scanned the black sky. “They’re gaining on us! Coystar, get us out of here!” she hissed. A grey coyote in a black tight suit nodded and ...